Essay Draft #2

I wasn't sure I was going to be able to pull this last essay off, but once I got started it was not as bad as I imagined. I got a late start on it because of my freewrites, and was real nervous sending it to everyone. After going over it again and doing some self-editing, I do not think it was too bad, given the circumstances. I'm looking forward to what the other drafts have written, and hearing from other people how I can make my draft better.