I just submitted essay #2 and I feel really good about it. I tried to take a different approach then all the other essays I read in class. I tried to go about in a more positive aspect and how it unites us as a nation. I struggled with the structure but overall I think the ideas I put into the paper were genuinely good ideas. I feel better about this essay then essay #1, although I did not start off this essay on a positive note. It took me quite some time to actually start because I felt stumped and had no idea what to write about. After I read everyone else essay I was still stuck and very far behind. The day I realized what wanted to write about was when Ms. Liptak said in class she was waiting for someone to say we needed fast food, and it hit me we do need it. Especially as a freshman having a fast food I’m use to having with friends at home takes me back to home in a sense.
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